< Talk:Prayer of the Refugee
Music video by Rise Against performing Prayer Of The Refugee. (C) 2006 Geffen Records #RiseAgainst #PrayerOfTheRefugee #Vevo #Rock. IMPORTANT NOTE!!! The tuning of the official song is half-step down. But this tab is already transposed to normal tuning. If you want to play it like the official.
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Reviewer:Aoba47 (talk·contribs) 20:50, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
- Grabbing this for a review. Aoba47 (talk) 20:50, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
- Comments
- Reference 10 is dead/broken and needs to either be replaced with a new source or through a website archive.
- Huh, I thought I got that one. Anyway, done.
- I would suggest being a little more descriptive with the ALT text for the infobox image (i.e. describing what it is in the image).
- May have gone a bit overboard with the ALT, but I think it accurately describes the image.
- Could you add the year that this song was recorded to the infobox if known?
- Done
- I do not think you need “long” in the phrase “three minutes and nineteen seconds long”.
- Done
- I could not see this song being identified as examples of “hardcore punk” and “melodic hardcore” in the source cited (i.e. the AllMusic source). Could you point this out in the source for me or use a different source to support this? Identifying a song’s genre can be pretty strict for these types of article so I just want to sure that is clearly cited and supported.
- I would say that this is fine (at least from my perspective) and those genres seem closely tied to not only the band, but the parent album in which the song appears so I think it should be okay. I just wanted to raise this to your attention in case you wanted to do further work with this article. Aoba47 (talk) 14:18, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
- I am not sure if the audio sample is exactly necessary as the caption and the incorporation of the sample into the article does not appear to illustrate a point beyond the text. I would either suggest removing the audio sample altogether or putting some critic’s opinion or description of the song’s instrumental to show how this sample can better illustrate the content rather than just having the reader go through the text.
- I always like listening to audio samples in these types of articles too; I have received this note in the past too so I know what you mean. If you find anything about the song's instrumental and/or sound, then you may be able to add it again in the future with a more descriptive caption. Thank you for addressing this. Aoba47 (talk) 14:18, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
- Final comment
- Wonderful work with this article. Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 03:18, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you for addressing my comments. This was a very interesting read and I enjoyed reviewing this. I will ✓Pass this. Thank you for letting me know about the iabot as that was the primary thing that I really wanted from Wikipedia as archiving all of the sources manually (especially for longer articles) can be a real pain and take a lot of time away from actual working on the content so I will definitely use it in the future! Good luck with your future projects, and I look forward to working with you in the future. Aoba47 (talk) 14:18, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
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